Comments for Cheesegreen http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com Plog of Chris Gower. Poet, Librarian and master of not much else. Fri, 18 Dec 2009 13:56:25 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on About by Aidan Baker http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/about/#comment-252 Aidan Baker Fri, 18 Dec 2009 13:56:25 +0000 #comment-252 Where does this public mode of composition stand wrt competitions, many of which have rules forbidding entry of work already published? Or do you not bother w. competitions? Where does this public mode of composition stand wrt competitions, many of which have rules forbidding entry of work already published? Or do you not bother w. competitions?

]]> Comment on E-Safety (How to stay safe against online pirates. by Chris http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/12/18/e-safety-how-to-stay-safe-against-online-pirates/#comment-250 Chris Fri, 18 Dec 2009 11:37:08 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=573#comment-250 True... I think the last stanza was me trying to make a twist in it. I was trying to make it seem that Steve and Barry were in it together, but as a result it goes against the light hearted message of the poem. Thanks for that valuable feedback Aiden, it's still work in progress so I'll update it later. True…

I think the last stanza was me trying to make a twist in it.

I was trying to make it seem that Steve and Barry were in it together, but as a result it goes against the light hearted message of the poem.

Thanks for that valuable feedback Aiden, it’s still work in progress so I’ll update it later.

]]> Comment on E-Safety (How to stay safe against online pirates. by Aidan Baker http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/12/18/e-safety-how-to-stay-safe-against-online-pirates/#comment-249 Aidan Baker Fri, 18 Dec 2009 11:33:14 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=573#comment-249 Not sure I get this. Has pirate Barry deceived loanshark Steve into thinking that Facebook Jim has taken out a loan? Or are Steve & Barry in cahoots to deceive Jim? If Steve & Barry in cahoots, what difference does online security make? Cdn't Steve ring Jim, just on basis on phonebook entry, to demand repayment of bogus loan? Not sure I get this. Has pirate Barry deceived loanshark Steve into thinking that Facebook Jim has taken out a loan? Or are Steve & Barry in cahoots to deceive Jim?

If Steve & Barry in cahoots, what difference does online security make? Cdn’t Steve ring Jim, just on basis on phonebook entry, to demand repayment of bogus loan?

]]> Comment on Wedding Ring by Chris http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/10/28/wedding-ring/#comment-246 Chris Wed, 04 Nov 2009 19:54:04 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=534#comment-246 Thanks for the comment, I really felt this needed to be said so I really appreciate your words about the last three lines :) Thanks for the comment, I really felt this needed to be said so I really appreciate your words about the last three lines :)

]]> Comment on Wedding Ring by thisbumpyjourney http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/10/28/wedding-ring/#comment-245 thisbumpyjourney Wed, 04 Nov 2009 00:28:06 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=534#comment-245 I love this. Having worn one for awhile, I know how it changes the skin, so this is very poignant. The last three lines are lovely. I keep reading over them to see what word combinations pop up. Thanks for posting it. I love this. Having worn one for awhile, I know how it changes the skin, so this is very poignant. The last three lines are lovely. I keep reading over them to see what word combinations pop up. Thanks for posting it.

]]> Comment on Services (Gordano) by katie moudry http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/10/28/services-gordano/#comment-243 katie moudry Fri, 30 Oct 2009 18:34:30 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=531#comment-243 I also recently stopped at Gordano service station late at night on the way back from a gig. This poem sums up the experience completely! I especially like the 'Our seat is plastic as we tear open our plastic prey from their cartons' They are such weird artificial places, like they've just grown up from the ground, but no-one quite knows how they got there.... I like the wedding ring poem too. sad, but beautiful. see you soon! xxx I also recently stopped at Gordano service station late at night on the way back from a gig. This poem sums up the experience completely! I especially like the

‘Our seat is plastic as we tear
open our plastic prey from
their cartons’

They are such weird artificial places, like they’ve just grown up from the ground, but no-one quite knows how they got there….

I like the wedding ring poem too. sad, but beautiful.

see you soon!

xxx

]]> Comment on Change by Sam http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/10/22/change/#comment-242 Sam Sat, 24 Oct 2009 01:41:58 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=516#comment-242 A very intense poem, with powerful images. It invites multiple readings. A very intense poem, with powerful images. It invites multiple readings.

]]> Comment on Teabag Poems by Tori http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/10/19/teabag-poems/#comment-241 Tori Mon, 19 Oct 2009 17:34:32 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=512#comment-241 Oooo how very dark ;) Enjoying both.. second one produces some nice imagery, the first one has a violent feel.. you tea Butcher er... says she the Blackly Butcher of Backers Down Oooo how very dark ;)

Enjoying both.. second one produces some nice imagery, the first one has a violent feel.. you tea Butcher er… says she the Blackly Butcher of Backers Down

]]> Comment on I C U by Chris http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/09/23/i-c-u/#comment-238 Chris Fri, 09 Oct 2009 12:23:30 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=501#comment-238 Thanks Pete :) Thanks Pete :)

]]> Comment on I C U by Peter Doyle http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/2009/09/23/i-c-u/#comment-237 Peter Doyle Thu, 08 Oct 2009 19:24:42 +0000 http://cheesegreen.wordpress.com/?p=501#comment-237 oh this is beautiful...an elegant economy that says so much...one of your best Chris. oh this is beautiful…an elegant economy that says so much…one of your best Chris.

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